DVA: RISE Peer Feedback

This week we had to Peer Review our classmates Fine Cut version of their Video Portrait.

The classmate I has was

Here is her Fine Cut Version of her Video Portrait.

What struck me about your video was how simplistic it was. The video was very straightforward. It also made me want to revisit my own video to clean up a few of the transitions that I have in my own video. Did you mean to focus your video completely on who your subject was? I thought it just scratched the surface of who your subject was. I know it's too late now but have you considered picking out a significant event or something special to the subject and focusing on that? I believe, it creates for a more interesting story and something more specific the audience can connect to. I did love the lighting in the video and the shot of him outside with the rain behind him. Only if we could hear it. I think that would be 100% more effective than the shot already is. It would take it to that next level. I do love the transitions here. It keeps a great flow thought out the video. Overall good video.